Talk:Sumathi Rao

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Hi Akhan22 this is looking nearly perfect! I only see a few things to point out:

Generally, we don't include links to other websites in the body of a Wikipedia article. These links are instead placed at the bottom of the article in an "external links" section. I see a couple of external links that need to be removed or relocated (B-L violation in grand unified theories, women in physics)
Your citation formatting is nearly perfect, but in the Honors and awards section I see one instance where there's a space between the punctuation and the reference.
I fixed the redlinks in your infobox by just making them link to the respective societies
Her spouse is listed in the infobox but not the article. If it's not present and cited in the article, then it has to have a citation accompanying it in the infobox. It can be kind of tricky to add citations to infoboxes using the visual editor. Let me know if you need help, and I can add it using the source editor.
The last sentence of "Honours and awards" doesn't really seem like an award, more like part of her career

This is looking really great! Nicely done :) Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:00, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Elysia (Wiki Ed), thank you for your insightful comments and feedback :). I will implement your suggestions.

I found a nice citation to add/mention her spouse in the article.
You are right about the last sentence in the awards section, I will shift it to career section. Akhan22 (talk) 21:59, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]