Talk:Steam-Heart's/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: DasallmächtigeJ (talk · contribs) 11:59, 9 February 2019 (UTC)
1. Is it well-written?[edit]
In short, yes. The layout seems perfectly fine, so does grammar/spelling.
2. Is it verifiable with no original research?[edit]
Yes, the article is meticulously sourced. All sources are reliable.
3. Is it broad in its coverage?[edit]
'Yes.. It covers everything from development, gameplay, to reception.
However, I would encourage User:TarkusAB to include a plot summary, giving a brief overview of plot and setting. I would do it myself, but the only English source here does not provide a useful plot summary, and all Youtube playthroughs of the game I could find used Japanese audio (I take it it never was released outside of Japan). I do not know how intricate the plot is, but I always consider it a must to include a plot summary if a game has one. As Tarkus seems to speak Japanese, maybe he/she can check back with me on this point.
4. Is it neutral?[edit]
Yes.
5. Is it stable?[edit]
Yes. Absolutely nothing is going to change here.
6. Is it illustrated?[edit]
Yes, sufficiently.
Conclusion[edit]
After examining the article, I conclude that it qualifies for an immediate pass. However, I would like to hear back from Tarkus whether a plot summary is doable/makes sense, until which I will delay finishing the review.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 11:59, 9 February 2019 (UTC)
- @DasallmächtigeJ:I split out the plot into its own section and added some details. I don't want to push too much undue weight on the plot per WP:VG/PLOT, and the details are not commented on by any sources. TarkusABtalk 14:44, 9 February 2019 (UTC)
- Alright, perfect! I'll update the status of the article right now.--DasallmächtigeJ (talk) 15:42, 9 February 2019 (UTC)