Talk:She's Madonna/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:48, 25 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Add release year for Rudebox
• the third and final international single released from the album → its third and final single
• Williams had played the song → Use "the track" here for alternation
• Musically the song was inspired by Kraftwerk's 1983 single → set comma after "Musically"
• reached the top-five → no -
• gold certifications → Gold certifications
• A music video of the track → A music video for the track
• when was the video released?

Infobox

• Alternative text for the cover artwork is missing
• Remove the genre as it's unreferenced in the article's body

Background

• "She's Madonna" was a collaboration between Williams and Pet Shop Boys and was the fifth and final → "She's Madonna" is a collaboration between Williams and Pet Shop Boys, and serves as the fifth and final
• Release year of Rudebox in brackets
• was supposed to be released, Williams had just come out → state "he" here for alternation
• had with his ex-girlfriend Tania Strecker.[1] She told → had with his ex-girlfriend Tania Strecker, who told
• commenting: "There is nothing → : to ,
• at all... I have → ... to [...]
• Contactmusic.com → Remove the ".com" part

Composition

• Williams stated: "My life → : to ,
• After playing "Tour de France" Williams → After playing "Tour de France", the singer
• "She's Madonna" and the song was composed → "She's Madonna", following which the single was composed
• Madonna, which goes like "We're → remove "which goes like"
• and the song has a s basic sequence → state "track" here for alternation

Critical reception

• "She's Madonna" was released in the United Kingdom on 5 March 2007.[9] → Please remove this and make a "Release history" section under "Certifications"
  • I have not done this since its just one release date available, and per MOS:TABLE we should not make tabular entry for single point, rather make it part of the prose. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)
• three out of five stars noting that the track → comma before "noting"
• than him [Madonna]?" Levine concluded → comma before "Levine"
• Entertainment.ie → Remove that ".ie" part
  • That is the name of the page also but changed. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)
• that the Pet Shop Boys own musical influence → that Pet Shop Boys' own musical influence
• The song received negative review → The song further received a negative review

Chart performance

• top-ten → top 10
• lowest peaking → lowest-peaking
• Scotland where it → comma before "where it"
• top-ten → top 10
• In Ireland it debuted → comma after "Ireland"
• Across Europe the song had → comma before "the song"
• top-five → top five
• on the chart for multiple week → on the charts for multiple weeks
• It received gold certification from → It received a Gold certification in
• Comma before "respectively"

Music video

• break from his Close Encounters Tour, and features Williams → break from William's Close Encounters Tour, and features him
• stage... Even → stage [...]
• to sing the song, in front of an → remove comma

Track listing

• flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

• Unlink Williams here
• Credits adapted from Robbie Williams' → no full names here

Charts

• flawless ;)

Certifications

• flawless ;)

Other stuff

Copy-violation

• 48.7%; you may want to remove something here!
  • Done! the WP:PLAGIARISM rule. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

Images and others

• Article perfectly illustrated by images ;)

Links

• No problems here!

References

• As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)
• No dead links! Good job!

 On hold for 7 days! Good job! Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:50, 26 December 2016 (UTC)

@Cartoon network freak: another one done. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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