Talk:Princess Twilight Sparkle (My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic episodes)

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Princess Twilight Sparkle (My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic episodes)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TeenAngels1234 (talk · contribs) 15:25, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I'm gonna review this. Stay tuned.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 15:25, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Isn't there a summary presentation of the main roles of the crew? Like "X wrote the episode, while X handled the storyboard".
- I don't really think this is necessary, because they can only be sourced to primary sources (either the show itself or tweets)
The part about Mary Jane Begin seems to have little connection to what was written earlier. I suggest first introducing the creatures outside of the Plot section, (e.g. "the evil dragon Discord") and making if possible a prosaic link to what was written before.
Isn't there some other review on these episodes? Even a third opinion would be helpful.
- There are several reviews from fansites, but I have refrained from adding those per MOS:TVRECEPTION. Pamzeis (talk) 03:25, 14 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Pamzeis: That's all.TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:12, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Brief summa. The article itself is considerably brief, but it still looks complete, since we're talking about two cartoon episodes with no huge cultural impact or complicated production. Passing.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 19:12, 15 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]