Talk:Patience (The X-Files)

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July 26, 2012	Good topic candidate	Promoted

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 16:53, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this one soon. Ruby 2010/2013 16:53, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

There's one deadlink
You say "the episode" quite a bit in the lead, so I might change "Overall, the episode received largely negative reviews from critics." to "Overall, it received largely negative reviews from critics."
""back-to-basics stand alines..." - typo on your part?
"anti-coagulants" could probably use a relevant wikilink
"While they drive off with the body, Abbott checks a dead tree out" -> "...Abbott inspects a dead tree." (sounds more encyclopedic)
"The cops" -> The police
"When his ground radar goes off, Scully goes outside after shooting up the ceiling" - shooting up? This could also be reworded into something more encyclopedic (shooting at?)
Portraying actor, Robert Patrick, explained, "['Patience'] is where it starts to toy with my willingness to believe in the paranormal and strange happenings. You'ge got a guy that's a bat, which is sort of out of the norm." - first part of this sentence could be reworded (portraying actor?)
"You'ge got a guy that's a bat" - typo on your part, or on the sources?
Use consistent date formatting

I believe that is it. Will place on hold for seven days, though I'm sure it will only take you a fraction of that time. :) Ruby 2010/2013 17:11, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! I believe I've addressed everything. The dead link thing was weird: apparently, the website is still there, they just removed a "0" in the url.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:23, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. Passing for GA. Ruby 2010/2013 21:11, 18 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]