Talk:Nemesis Games

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Untitled[edit]

Saw a request to delete based on need for citation. Updated with citations and sales page.

Advert[edit]

Pretty self explanatory. Avoids spoilers and talks in generalities. I lack the requisite knowledge to properly clean this up, as I have not read it in months, but I thought it worth noting nonetheless.

Plot section and warning about ad style[edit]

I agree with that warning. I posted a comment on the page for either "Cibola Burn" or the one before that, that the way the Plot section was written, reads like a list of characters. I later retracted my criticism and left the section as it is. But now that I see the warning about the style of the section, I think I can write a plot synopsis to replace it. I just finished reading the novel.

This also makes my "Monk" senses tingle. The Plot section should be a synopsis of the plot, not a list of characters. The list of characters belongs in a List of Characters section.

Best regards TheBaron0530 (talk) 12:21, 7 April 2017 (UTC)theBaron0530[reply]