Talk:Moxy (band)/GA1

GA Review

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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance:

   I had to make some adjustments to make the article [more] easy to navigate.--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. References to sources:

   Few, compared to its size.--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

   B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:

   Full of un-reliable sources.--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

   This article [also] need to be summarized.--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

   "Moxy's hard-hitting style of wicked guitar riffs, heavy blues influence, thunderous backbeat, and shrieking vocals, was loved by Canadian fans so much that promotional copies of the first album found their way to hard rock stations in the southern USA." huh?--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:

   This article contain excessive copyrighted material ("tons" of sound samples).--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

   B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

Quick-fail (Revision as of 13:34, 21 July 2009).--Cannibaloki 19:40, 21 July 2009 (UTC)

Sound samples

Ten copyrighted samples is way excessive, and so I have removed them. Many of them are duplicated in the articles for the individual albums, which is where they should be (although the use is also excessive there). Black Kite 09:47, 22 July 2009 (UTC)