Talk:Mortal Recoil/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Khanassassin (talk · contribs) 18:54, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Holla, me gon' review dis artikle, maan. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:54, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Plot

"whose behaviors seems off." => "whose behavior seems off." Otherwise good. --Khanassassin ☪ 19:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:33, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Production

"commented that it fight both the story and Ice King's character remarkably well." Not sure what fight stands for in this case, but shouldn't it be "fights"? Good otherwise. --Khanassassin ☪ 19:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Fights" should've been "fits". Good catch.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:33, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

All cool, same suggestion as with in the "Mortal Folly" review. --Khanassassin ☪ 19:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

References

Just an error (ref #14), and again the non-reference external links suggestion. --Khanassassin ☪ 19:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:33, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]

That's all. --Khanassassin ☪ 19:09, 31 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I think I got it now.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 18:33, 5 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Ayo, you got it and I'll pass it, ya bish (ya bish) {Kendrick Lamar reference}. Yeah. --Khanassassin ☪ 14:38, 6 September 2013 (UTC)[reply]