Talk:Matthew Paul Olmos

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This is worded somewhat awkwardly, but the point is there: "Originally planning to write, direct and act in movies, Olmos was not exposed to theatre until his senior year of college when he took an Intro to Playwriting course. Olmos stayed an extra year and switched his major to receive a B.A in Playwriting, after his professor told him he had talent for playwriting.[4]"

You have a section on so the ghosts of mexico, but it may also be helpful to include some info on the living life of the daughter mira, as you mention that this is his most famous work. Some critical reception of his plays could also be a nice addition.

I would suggest retitling "Views on Theatre" to something more intriguing. Perhaps "Theatrical Philosophy" or something along those lines. Also, I think this section, as well as "Personal Style" could benefit from being their own headers. Although they are related to his career, they are not quite the same thing.

It is a little strange that this header has a citation: Full Length Plays[26]