Talk:Life cycle thinking

Score: 8/10

Intro

Introduction could be shorter. It should concisely introduce Life Cycle Thinking; the additional information and examples will be more useful in the later sections. Text is too colloquial--because this is a formal entry, it should be more professional/academic, less conversational. In order to make the introduction stronger, the group should try to distinguish Life Cycle Thinking from Life Cycle Analysis/Assessment rather than waiting until the "Approaches" section, since the two topics are tied so closely together.

Goals

It would be stronger for the group to either use bullet points or to type their thoughts out. Doing both negates the importance and is very redundant. The paragraph reads like an essay rather than an article.

Additionally, some of the bullets are sentences (with periods), while others are clauses (no periods). It should be uniform.

Sectors

We like the way the sectors are laid out. It is clear, concise, and explanative.

But, on the other hand, since the group is talking about Life Cycle Thinking, try to use more conceptual terms and show the importance of thinking in the different sectors as opposed to trying to give examples. Answer the question: why is Life Cycle Thinking important for these sectors? For example, the "Retail" paragraph, talks about product life cycle, but does not touch on Life Cycle Thinking.

Approaches

The formatting is incorrect. There are many different text sizes, colors, and a peculiar box under LCM, IPP, and SCP. Furthermore, the links to the different articles should be within the body of the text rather than their headings.

Applications

We really like the delineation between "Consumers", "Businesses", and "Governments". It is clear, and makes an important distinction.

Policies

Great! Provides good background on the application. Our only concern is that "Policies" are applications of Life Cycle Thinking. Could the group combine these by putting them under the "Governments" section of "Applications"?

If the second paragraph under American Policy is important, then it should be rewritten to be tailored to the United States, rather than having the focus on North America.

Importance of Life Cycle Thinking

This is a great and important paragraph. We suggest moving it following the introduction.

General Comments

• Life Cycle Thinking/Assessment is capitalized in some areas, and not in others. Should be consistent.
• Some of the paragraphs read more like an essay rather than an article; it is too wordy. The group has high quality information, and we would not want it to get lost in the text. Try to be concise--the group does not need as many introductory sentences. Paragraphs introducing different topics are unnecessary (i.e. Life Cycle Thinking in Policy)
• Do not need as many everyday examples--distraction from the professionalism of the article.
• In explaining Life Cycle ______, try not to use "Life Cycle" in the definition.
• No sources of images seem to be correctly linked
• Page is not formatted correctly. "Introduction" should be a heading, not a Level 2.

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Discussion and critical assessment

This article has already been flagged as having multiple issues. One thing that I think it could benefit from is a section discussing the limitations of this approach, including a balanced critical assessment of life cycle thinking. This would help to balance it out, in my view. Totorotroll (talk) 12:38, 27 December 2020 (UTC)

Greenwashing

The way the article is written smacks of greenwashing, as if the inevitable result of such thinking will lead us to salvation. It won't, it's basically the bare minimum anyone can do. ZadieTwinge (talk) 07:04, 24 June 2023 (UTC)