Talk:Lady Blue (TV series)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Bcschneider53 (talk · contribs) 04:46, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Time to return the favor. I'll go ahead and take this on. Comments may appear tomorrow or Sunday depending on my schedule. Hold me to this and don't let me forget about it. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 04:46, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

• Thank you for picking this up for review! Aoba47 (talk) 04:50, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead/infobox

• I thought runtimes generally omitted commercials; perhaps you could at least put "60 minutes (including commercials)" if you want to keep the 60.

• Added. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Premise and characters

• I'd simplify the image caption.

• Reduced somewhat. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

• Link to John J. O'Connor (journalist).

• Linked. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Production

• "steely nerve and conservative stance on crime" with Rose's "more upbeat, fun-loving, liberal persona". I know the source here is the Reesman article, but I think an IC would be good here to more clearly attribute the quotes to their source.

• I am not sure what you mean by this. What is an IC? Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

• @Aoba47: Sorry, inline citation. In other words, I'd put a ref tag right after the quote. It won't keep it from passing GA though. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 21:11, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Episodes

• Is there a specific airdate for the final episode?

• Unfortunately, I could not find an exact date for the final episode (especially one from a reliable source). Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Broadcast history

• Bryan Reesman's first name can be removed per WP:SURNAME.

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Critical reception

• O'Connor, Anderson and Reesman have already been mentioned in the article, so again, WP:SURNAME.

• Revised. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

Just some minor prose issues. Well done! Putting on hold. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 18:27, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

• @Bcschneider53: Thank you for the review; I believe that I have addressed everything. Aoba47 (talk) 20:16, 27 January 2018 (UTC)

• @Aoba47: Well done. Pass for GA. --Bcschneider53 (talk) 21:12, 27 January 2018 (UTC)