Talk:King Arthur & the Knights of Justice (video game)

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Good articleKing Arthur & the Knights of Justice (video game) has been listed as one of the Video games good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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DateProcessResult
July 8, 2008Good article nomineeListed

GA review[edit]

This article is good, but there are some concerns that need to be addressed:

  • May 1995 – Redundant linking
  • which was itself loosely inspired by Arthurian legends – "itself" is unnecessary here.
  • A few redundant links throughout. Example: American, dragon, antidote etc.
  • and was inspired by The Legend of Zelda series as well as various written works – Change "as well as" to "and"
  • accompagnied -> accompanied
  • sword of Excalibur -> Excalibur sword
  • The party finds the seventh and eighth Keys of Truth in Crownhorn village and the Cape of Death, respectively. – The party find…
  • Arthur travels to the Town of the Dead alone then to the Plain of the Dead and retrieves his two dead Knights. - Arthur travels to the Town of the Dead by himself, then to the Plain of the Dead and retrieves his two dead Knights.
  • They reach Morgana's castle, called Stone Gardens, and defeat Morgana's dragon form, thus obtaining the last Key of Truth. – "Called" is unnecessary.
  • King Arthur & the Knights of Justice was the first Enix video game developed by an American company. – Cut out "video". It flows better that way.
  • while the website Allgame rated it 3 stars out of 5. – It should be 3 out of 5 stars.
  • Electronic Gaming Monthly felt that the graphics lack vibrant colors but that the music was "alright". – I’d cut out the first "that". Also, shouldn’t there be a comma before but?
  • A key problem highlighted was the game's lack of indication concerning which Knights to bring to defeat which bosses, as only one is suited for each. – I didn't quite understand this sentence, and it seemed a bit awkward. Can you please rephrase it a little?
  • The game seemed "unfinished and underdeveloped" for the Video Game Bible[16] as well as Milligan – comma after Video Game Bible.
  • The Video Game Bible gave the title a rarity score of 6 out of 10 on its scale, meaning the game may have had less than 20,000 copies produced. – Why does it mean that? Clarify.

Let me know when you've addressed my concerns. The Prince (talk) 22:04, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've fixed these issues. Antidote appears only once, I think it is reasonable to link it. I fixed the "key problem" stuff by adding a sentence in the Gameplay section so that the comment in Reception appears less cumbersome and hopefully clearer. Also I fixed a typo concerning the VG Bible (it's "more" not "less", sorry). Kariteh (talk) 14:22, 3 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I would just like to point out that "party" is a singular collective noun, and therefore the plural form of the verb should be used (i.e. finds, retrieves, etc.) The other way is incorrect grammar, so I am going to go ahead and fix that. Artichoker[talk] 22:07, 4 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]
You are quite right. Thanks for pointing that out. Anyway, the article has passed. Great work on fixing the issues. The Prince (talk) 14:19, 8 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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