Talk:Kendriya Vidyalaya, Rayagada

This article was nominated for deletion on 2 December 2015. The result of the discussion was keep.

In draftspace[edit]

@Hpsatapathy: Since it does seem like you're trying to work on improving the article, I'm moving it to the draftspace for now. Offhand the article has two issues: the first is that the article needs more sourcing to show how this merits an entry per WP:GNG. The second is that the article does read as promotional. I don't think that this is intentional on your part, but the way you've listed things does somewhat come across as promotional. You may want to remove the bullet points and try writing this in paragraph style. A lot of businesses/organizations/etc will use bullet points in their marketing material in order to promote their services, so this isn't really a good thing to use in articles. Tokyogirl79 (｡◕‿◕｡) 10:49, 16 May 2015 (UTC) I am working on itHpsatapathy (talk) 13:49, 11 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]