Talk:Gilles Lebreton

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I have made an extensive edit. I have translated the rest of the original French page. This should now be re-assesed whenever possible. Ktkvtsh (talk) 23:18, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments for this:
  1. This article is missing a narrative line. When discussing his political background it states that he joined the Rally for France however then goes on to talk about Marie Le Pen with no transition. Did he leave the party? Did he shift after it collapsed? Also if he was part of the Rally for France why did he campaign for Jean-Pierre Chevènement. In general the section which associates him with Le Pen needs clarification or rephrasing.
  2. Links are missing. there's a mention of "Le Pen's party" but no links to which party. In the same vein I have no idea what RN list so perhaps a link can be included if possible
  3. A lot of unnecessary info in his biography. WP: Relevance I took out some of it but I would scan over the article and revise it.
  4. Sources are missing. Specifically with his association with Le Pen. You can include the sources from the French version but they need to be included.
Chefs-kiss (talk) 14:52, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]