Talk:Farrah Fawcett/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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I will be reviewing This article. --Vinay84 (talk) 07:45, 25 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

First Impressions: The introduction is too short for an Article this size. Please expand it.

The Early career – TV commercials and Early TV series appearances sections are too small. Simple suggestion to Merge the two into a single Early career section

--Vinay84 (talk) 07:54, 25 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I was unaware this article had been submitted. I'm thinking it's a little early for that. There are several problems I see with the article as it stands now, and a number of things I plan to try with the article. To your points, those two sections had originally been one, and were split by an editor I had assumed would be adding further info to justify their independence. Another editor deleted a notable, uncontroversial point of information in the lead, with the argument that it already appeared elsewhere in the article. I don't want to get in the way of someone else's request, but I'm thinking that it might be a good idea to hold off for a month or so and, knowing this is imminent, I (and perhaps other interested editors who may note the GA review is at hand) will focus on this article over the next few weeks. Abrazame (talk) 08:45, 25 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

OK GA Review removed