Talk:Evan Bayh 2008 presidential campaign/GA2

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Gary King (talk) 21:10, 18 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"the latter began thinking about a possible run for president in 2008" – perhaps something like "the latter considered the possibility of running for president in 2008" instead. More descriptive, as "began thinking" isn't as evocative. Done
I don't think "homestate" is ever used as one word? Done
For the first image of Bayh, please provide a more descriptive caption, such as "Official Senate portrait of Bayh" (if that's accurate). Done
In quotations, the punctuation at the end of the quote goes outside the quotation if the quote is a sentence fragment (per WP:PUNC, I believe). Done

Gary King (talk) 21:10, 18 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the review. It is appreciated. --William S. Saturn (talk) 22:06, 18 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Okay I think that's everything. Passing. Gary King (talk) 23:28, 18 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]