Talk:Death and immortality in Middle-earth/GA1

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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
  • A couple duplinks found using the tool.
  • Fixed.
  • "by fighting" Fighting who or what?
  • Enemies of any description in the Norse myths.
  • "evil characters" you could just say "antagonists".
  • Not the same thing, nor does it really apply to Gollum, for instance.
  • "to a fiery end" considering the next clause, this should be "to a fiery end in LOTR" to have a consistent pattern.
  • Added.
  • "Medieval" you used the spelling Mediaeval in an earlier article, I'm not really sure which is more common in British English.
  • -ie- has become more common now (and it saves our American friends from constantly "correcting" it, too).
  • "Boromir, Denethor, Gollum, Saruman, Sauron, Théoden" why no links for all of these?
  • Linked Théoden; the others are all linked above.
  • Really nothing else in the prose that I can pick apart.
  • Noted.
  • The images are all licensed and used correctly.
  • Noted.
  • The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
  • Noted.
  • Spotchecks:
    • Dalfonzo, Gina (2007). "Humble Heroism: Frodo Baggins as Christian Hero in The Lord of the Rings". In Pursuit of Truth. Verifies all claims made.
    • Bedell, Haley (2015). "Frodo Baggins: The Modern Parallel to Christ in Literature" (PDF). Humanities Capstone Projects. Pacific University (Paper 24). Verifies all claims made.
    • Stucky, Mark (Summer 2006). "Middle Earth's Messianic Mythology Remixed: Gandalf's Death and Resurrection in Novel and Film" (PDF). Journal of Religion and Popular Culture. Verifies all claims made.
    • Shippey, Tom (2005). "Another road to Middle-earth: Jackson's movie trilogy". In Isaacs, Neil D.; Zimbardo, Rose A. (eds.). Understanding the Lord of the Rings: The Best of Tolkien Criticism. Verifies all claims made.
  • Noted.
  • Really nice article overall, that's all I have. AryKun (talk) 14:31, 26 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]