Talk:Crônica da casa assassinada

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Five points to attend to[edit]

Paging Lamanix:

A Wikipedia article may not cite a Wikipedia article or IMDB. I've removed the former, temporarily retained the latter.
"a difficulty persists in framing it in one of the currents of the national novel": An awkwardly mixed metaphor, as you don't frame something in a current.
"a tribute poem to Cardoso": What's its title and where's it published?
"This can also be seen in texts [including] the unpublished Baltazar": How can something be seen in a book if this isn't published?
I've removed the claim that this is a masterpiece. Who has said it's a masterpiece, and where? When you can provide evidence, feel free to reinstate this.

-- Hoary (talk) 05:11, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging Lamanix: I have five more:

"The story is told through letters": Would it help to say by whom and to whom?
"opens the book in a cyclic key": I don't understand.
"conquered by the vanguards": Who are these vanguards?
"a degrading social order": Does "degrading" mean "decaying", "disintegrating", "dissolving", "destructive", something else?
What's the meaning of "coord."?

-- Hoary (talk) 12:41, 27 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Hoary: Thank you for your comments. I have just corrected the items you mentioned. Lamanix (talk) 20:04, 2 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Well done, Lamanix! I'm in a rush now, but some time in the next 24 hours I'll take a closer look. -- Hoary (talk) 09:49, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Done! -- Hoary (talk) 22:48, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]