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Needs links, detail on connection with PA, Pittsburgh[edit]
This article needs links in several place, and some detail on how this particular member of the Mellon family is connected to Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. More inline citations, too, and a photo would be great. --DThomsen8 (talk) 18:32, 19 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Needs to be better organization and greater detail[edit]
This article is not formatted properly and is missing sections, paragraphs need to be better organized and in cases need to be more chronological. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Parzival191919 (talk • contribs) 13:23, 16 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]