Talk:Allen Shelton

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 24 August 2020 and 4 December 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): 1929Mastertone. Peer reviewers: Holger Olesen.

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peer review[edit]

Allen Shelton’s lead section is fairly clear but is lacking information. The sentence “ His playing was described as bouncy” could be placed somewhere in his biography rather than the lead section.

Clear Structure: Some of the structure is clear. The structure is lacking useful information and is very vague. It also contains non- useful things like “Making records and having a good time.”

Coverage is balanced as far as what is there, but the coverage is lacking information. There is not enough content.

Neutral content: The little information here is neutral.

Reliable sources: The sources used are not the best sources, but are not bad sources. It would not hurt to retrieve information from better sources.

The lead does not satisfy me. There is not enough content.

The lead lacks information and contains non-useful information.

The lead gives more weight to the fact that Allen Shelton played with Jim & Jesse. Useful information is missing.

Sections are in good order

The length is equal to importance, but lacks info

Hiro0603 (talk) 17:34, 10 October 2019 (UTC)willzc24[reply]