Talk:AEL Limassol B.C./GA1

GA Review[edit]

Unsuccessful. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 09:30, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 23:19, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I am planning on reviewing this article for GA Status, over the next couple of days. Thank you for nominating the article for GA status. I hope I will learn some new information, and that my feedback is helpful.

If nominators or editors could refrain from updating the particular section that I am updating until it is complete, I would appreciate it to remove a edit conflict. Please address concerns in the section that has been completed above (If I've raised concerns up to references, feel free to comment on things like the lede.)

I generally provide an overview of things I read through the article on a first glance. Then do a thorough sweep of the article after the feedback is addressed. After this, I will present the pass/failure. I may use strikethrough tags when concerns are met. Even if something is obvious why my concern is met, please leave a message as courtesy.

Best of luck! you can also use the {{done}} tag to state when something is addressed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}

Please let me know after the review is done, if you were happy with the review! Obviously this is regarding the article's quality, however, I want to be happy and civil to all, so let me know if I have done a good job, regardless of the article's outcome.

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AEL Limassol Basketball Club (Greek: Αθλητική Ένωση Λεμεσού, romanized: Athlitiki Enosi Lemesou, lit. 'Athletic Union of Limassol'), also known as PAYABL EKA AEL for sponsorship reasons and commonly referred to as AEL, is the professional basketball club of the AEL multi-sport club, based in Limassol, Cyprus. - this is a hell of a lede sentence. Could we not just say "AEL... Is a professional basketball club." And then later explain that it's part of a multi-sport setup and the like? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Internationally, the club ranks seventh in the all time rankings for the most successful basketball teams in EuroCup[a] history.[ - the note suggests that this is only a four year period? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The note would need a source. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The "most successful" link is an WP:EASTEREGG Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
retroactively branded as AEL's two "golden ages"^{[according to whom?]} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The First Golden Age - please don't link to a section from this article like this. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
generally refers^{[according to whom?]} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Second Golden Age (2002–2010) - ditto again with this link. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
history,[1][2][4][7][8][9] - holy WP:CITEKILL batman. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
voted Cypriot sports team of the year back to back (2004, 2005) - ^{[according to whom?]} Also WP:OL/WP:SOB. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
In addition to being the only sports club in Cyprus to have clinched a European trophy - wait, why have we spent so long talking about theoretical periods of time, and not their European win? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 7 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Review meta comments[edit]

I'll begin the review as soon as I can! If you fancy returning the favour, I have a list of nominations for review at WP:GAN and WP:FAC, respectively. I'd be very grateful if you were to complete one of these if you get time. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 23:19, 25 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- quite a bit to look at just in the lede section above. Could you take a look at it before I go any further DreadPirateRoberts1930? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:01, 16 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.