Talk:2nd Armoured Brigade (Australia)/GA1

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 07:55, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]


This article is in good shape. I have a few comments:

  • There is a bit of repetition in the lead with sentences beginning "The brigade..." Mix it up a bit?
  • link corps
  • pipe out NSW from Narrabri, New South Wales
  • "was sent to replace themit"
  • I can't make sense of "but was replaced in July 1943 by the 2/6th Cavalry Regiment in August"
  • link 3MD for Southern Command
  • "resulted in a focus on limited tactics" isn't clear to me. Could you improve the wording here?
  • the caption should probably read "A Yeramba self propelled artillery vehicles, 1949" as this was the prototype

Otherwise all good. Placing on hold for the above minor issues to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:17, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Peacemaker67: G'day, PM, thanks for taking a look at this. I think I've addressed all of these points. Here are my edits: [1]. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 09:35, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
No worries, a pleasure. This article is well-written, verifiable using reliable sources, covers the subject well, is neutral and stable, contains no plagiarism, and is illustrated by appropriately licensed images with appropriate captions. Passing. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 09:43, 26 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]
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