Draft talk:Sarah Phillips (novel)

Hey you guys, so I will first say how amazingly detailed this article is. I feel as though if someone had to read Sarah Phillips for class and needed an in depth understanding of the plot, this page would be a God send. I think you guys approached this article with the plot summary being the bulk of it, and I can feel that through the amount of detail in it. Something that I think might be a bit helpful with the direction of the page might be an overall plot summary that us about a paragraph, then having each section of the book as a subheading where you include all of the information you have present. It seems like a rather large read and everything blends a bit, but if the intent was to keep it in a story format, then maybe bolding the titles of the sections in the plot summary would be a good option as well. I think it will just aid in helping readers navigate the extensiveness and detail in the summary a bit better. I would also suggest making your headers a bit larger so that they stand out more for the reader.

As for the rest of the article, I really enjoyed that you included a themes section. I think providing guiding ideas from the book was a nice touch and really beneficial to whoever is viewing this page. I think your explanations of the themes and incorporation of quotes was a great touch, but I do worry that some of them have opinionated views. I can definitely be wrong here but the use of calling her peers ignorant or calling Sarah naïve seem like your opinions of the characters rather than stating themes you have seen. Aside from that, and I am still a bit unsure of how correct I am, my only comment is more of a stylistic choice in which I would bold the themes. Again, just for an easier read of the content, it might be helpful. I think your critical reception was also a good touch and the use of Val Smith as a source and her ideologies gives a scholarly touch to the article. All around, I think you guys have a super detailed and helpful article for someone who has or has not read this novel!

Tiaratillis99 (talk) 14:19, 26 April 2019 (UTC)