Draft talk:Museum of Ceramic Giuseppe Gianetti

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This page is part of an Educational Project by students of LIUC, Italy, with a course page at: https://outreachdashboard.wmflabs.org/courses/LIUC_-_Universit%C3%A0_Cattaneo/Digital_Technology_(Autumn_2023)/home . The users of the group are new to the Wikipedia platform, have completed Training for Students, and are learning to edit following Wikipedia rules. They are open to any advice on improvements of the page in conformity to Wikipedia requirements and guidelines, and any help useful for the enhancement of the page will be gladly accepted. The student Usernames are:

• LouiseRnlt
• Candicecousi
• DanieleFra04
• Fdrc10
• Beaotto
• LIUC1Irene03

Limelightangel (talk) 20:01, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

Choosing the paragraphs and dividing the tasks

Hi guys, I think we should organize our tasks and decide the paragraphs that are going to be part of the page DanieleFra04 (talk) 17:39, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

@DanieleFra04: Note the Talk guidelines at https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Help:Talk_pages . Talk is for page topic discusion, not educational project team planning. Note that the 'Hi guys' style is inappropriate and meaningless to other editors.Limelightangel (talk) 20:06, 14 November 2023 (UTC)

Issues

I am working on localisation and I received a message in red "Lua error in Module:Location_map at line 410: Malformed coordinates value.". I don't know how to correct my mistake.

I think I've solved the problem --Candicecousi (talk) 12:21, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

Structure

Pages do not have a section header for 'Introduction'. The 'lead section' should be created first to avoid duplication of content and links later in the article. The summary introduction or 'lead section' is explained at: Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section Limelightangel (talk) 15:19, 16 November 2023 (UTC)

Grammar

• 'museum of ceramic Giuseppe Gianetti'
• 'Stand out among the Italian manufactories'
• '65 pieces regarding European manufactories.'
• 'The oriental section, instead,'
• 'comprises the primary nucleus of approximately 230 Milan's pieces '
• 'The Museum collection is divided into three different sections '
• 'but has aslo a circle garden '
• 'for the Western market ' (missing punctuation)

Limelightangel (talk) 20:27, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

I changed and corrected sentences. LouiseRnlt (talk) 22:45, 19 November 2023 (UTC)

• Poor grammar to correct: "Noteworthy is the handrail of the staircase leading to the Museum's second floor, which was meticulously crafted following a design conceptualised by Carla Biffi, one of Nina Biffi's sisters. Giannetti's relatives, who owned the building from 1936, decided to donate both the villa and the collection in 1994, after a long and precise classification of all pieces, to Fondazione COE for the Museum to be built." Limelightangel (talk) 16:50, 20 November 2023 (UTC)
• 'Stand out among the Italian manufacturing'
• 'Alternately, the oriental section '
• '65 pieces regarding European manufacturing'
• '18th-century'
• 'used to live there. '

Limelightangel (talk) 17:02, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

Style

• avoid the use of 'but has'.
• check Style Manual on dates e.g. '18th-century'. See Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Dates_and_numbers
• 'boasts'

Limelightangel (talk) 20:28, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

• 'and even retains the'
• 'a little town'

Limelightangel (talk) 16:48, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

References

• text number for ref. 1 is in the wrong place
• ref. numbers for 3 and 4 are in the wrong place
• all 3 refs. are incorrectly formatted with incorrect use of the Cite Website template.
• refs 1 & 2 are duplicates and need use of refname in the cite template to resolve. Use Refname in the Cite template to avoid creating multiple references to the same source: "Often, you will want to use the same source more than once in an article to support multiple facts. In this case, you can click Named references in the toolbar, and select a previously added source to re-use." See:Help:Introduction_to_referencing_with_Wiki_Markup/3
• Ref. 3 text needs to be in correct case, not all UPPER CASE; and check Help for referencing non-English sources (language/translation)

Limelightangel (talk) 20:39, 18 November 2023 (UTC)

• the following block of text has no references: "The historical villa preserves its original flooring, parquet, marble features, staircases, window fixtures, furnishings, paintings, mirrors, Murano glass chandeliers, bathrooms complete with their respective fittings, and even retains the original light switches. Noteworthy is the handrail of the staircase leading to the Museum's second floor, which was meticulously crafted following a design conceptualised by Carla Biffi, one of Nina Biffi's sisters. Giannetti's relatives, who owned the building from 1936, decided to donate both the villa and the collection in 1994, after a long and precise classification of all pieces, to Fondazione COE for the Museum to be built." Limelightangel (talk) 16:47, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

corrected the reference, adding author, pages and dates Fdrc10 (talk) 15:11, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Incorrect Draft Page title

'Museum of Ceramic Giuseppe Gianetti' is the wrong page title for this English page. It is grammatically incorrect (Ceramics', not 'Ceramic'). It does not use the popular English name for it. Nothing comes up in searches for this page title. It's also spelt differently in the draft content ('The Museum of Ceramics "Giuseppe Gianetti"'). It could be better as any of the following, and you need to check to define the correct English page title:

• G. Gianetti Museum of Ceramics, Saronno
• Museum Giuseppe Gianetti (Google Business English listing)
• Gianetti Museum of Ceramics
• Museum of Ceramica Giuseppe Gianetti
• Museo della Ceramica Giuseppe Gianetti (Italian webite & Facebook pages)
• Museo Giuseppe Gianetti (on English Wikipedia page for Saronno)
• etc.

Once this is done, you need to: 1. create a new draft page with the correct page title 2. copy the existing markup to the new draft page space 3. copy the existing draft talk page markup to the new draft talk page 4. place the appropriate 'mark for delete'/'speedy deletion' tag on the 'old' draft page - see help resources. Limelightangel (talk) 20:55, 18 November 2023 (UTC)