Draft:Joe Gardner

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Declined by KylieTastic 57 days ago. Last edited by Diannaa 57 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Comment: This was copied from Soul (2020 film). — Diannaa (talk) 18:04, 16 March 2024 (UTC)

In New York City, pianist Joe Gardner teaches music part-time at a middle school while dreaming of playing jazz professionally. When he receives an offer to teach full-time, his mother Libba urges him to accept, although Joe is resistant. Joe learns famous jazz musician Dorothea Williams has an opening in her quartet and auditions at a jazz club. Impressed with his piano playing, Dorothea hires him for that night's show. As Joe heads off, his excitement distracts him, and he falls down an open manhole.

Joe finds himself a disembodied soul heading into an afterlife called the "Great Beyond". Unwilling to die, he tries to escape but ends up in the "Great Before", a realm where new souls are prepared for life on Earth with guidance from otherworldly counselors. Determened to get back to his body he teams up with a soul that has been neglective of going to earth.

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