Talk:Adventure Time season 4/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Khanassassin (talk · contribs) 11:42, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Yup. Me again. --Khanassassin ☪ 11:42, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Lede

• "American animated television series" => "the American animated television series".

  Changed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:13, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

• The rest is nice.

Development

Concept

• "...and his best friend Jake". If I'm correct, isn't Jake an adoptive brother of Finn?

  Changed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:13, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

• The rest is good.

Production

• "Fred Seibert announced to fans that..." Was the announcment for-fans-only/fan-exclusive? If not, "to fans" is not needed.

  Clarified to illustrate that it was through Frederator's blog.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 23:12, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Ken Osborne noted that it was increasingly difficult to produce new episode ideas because the writers had 'already used a lot of cool ideas'." Is there any kind of replacement for the first or second "ideas" so it doesn't sound repetitive? Perhaps remove the second ideas and add "ones" outside of the quotatiton marks?

  Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 23:12, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Ward explained that enjoyed the concept of poops..." Capitalize the "poops" here, or un-caps the one before that. Oh, and add "he" before "enjoyed". :)

  Both fixed!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 23:12, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Ward was extremely proud with the writing staff for the season..." I think "proud" would be good, just to avoid that POV-ish feeling. :)

  Removed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 23:12, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

• Otherwise, good.

Cast

• It's all cool.

Reception and release

Ratings

• Fine.

Reviews and accolades

• Good, good.

Home media

• "...consisting of region 1 and region 2... were created for Region 1 markets". Should "region" be capitalized or not?

  Fixed.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:13, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

• Otherwise, good.

Episodes

Notes / References

• References and the note seem nice.

  I believe I got everything. Thanks for the review!--Gen. Quon (Talk) 16:13, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

  Hold you're horses there, son! There's still one or two sections I gotta review. :) --Khanassassin ☪ 18:39, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

  Whoops! I'm a fool! ;) I just glossed right over everything else.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 22:53, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

  Yes, you are, in fact, an extremely unintelligent fool! Just messin' around. :) Okay, take care of these few issues I left at the "Production" and this article's good to go! :) --Khanassassin ☪ 20:25, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

  Alright, how's that biz, now?--Gen. Quon (Talk) 23:12, 18 March 2013 (UTC)

  Cool, I give this article_{of a notoriously overrated show (sorry)}a Pass! :) --Khanassassin ☪ 13:19, 19 March 2013 (UTC)